P3
Character profile 3
Here is the increased development of the character currently called Benjamin Moretti: I will be changing his name to Johnathan Lenatriale (Len-at-ri-al)
Murder - is something I wanted to develop so we could show him as someone who grows from a person who kills others to someone who sees the peace in the world without murder.
The Insomnia was something I added to make him more relatable to some people who would be the target audience. It's almost a known fact that teenagers deprive themselves of sleep which they need so incorporating this in makes him more realistic.
The character wanting to be alone is more for the fear of love than anything else. During his past, the people he loves always end up dead, either by someone else killing them or him having to do so. This history marks him and is the reason why he is seen wearing darker clothing, to try and reflect the darkness within him.
The characters drive to become the best of the best is driven by him and his powers not being unique to him. The powers he has to help him in fighting others with similar abilities. Currently, the creatures don't have names but they will be rare to come across. It might even be possible for there to be a tournament for him and the others to have fights.
I wanted the character to be seen as being desperate to the viewer so killing whoever he needs to in order to survive shows this.
The next few traits were increases from a more realistic version of the character. By multi-lingual I mean that he is able to speak any language, not just Portuguese and Spanish. With the characters steel focus, I'm trying to refer to him always completing something he starts and never getting distracted with his mission/goal.
The next three, martial arts expert, perfect marksman (Ex SAS) and skill of the best driver in the world all are there to make the character seem skilled and to give diversity in the action that he can go through.











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